Yep. Makes me want to claw out somebody's eyes when it isn't working.
A little--when I commented on your last post (and now this one, too). I don't have my blog with blogger, so I don't have anything else to go by.Becky
Apparently they've been having maintenance fits all month. Another one is scheduled for today, this time with promises that everything will be hunky-dory afterwards. Hm. Not a good time to (re)start a blog and suddenly be enthusiastic about making entries!Grrr...
Now, see how much stronger your writing is Jaime when you use strong verbs? You could've just said "take out somebody's eyes" or "pull out somebody's eyes", but no, you said, "claw" them out. Good job! ROFL.
Where are those strong verbs when they could be really useful--like when and editor find chapter three boring? And claw is exactly what I want to do...with my chipped mom nails.
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